The cabin

[bob202]

22 year old Emily was really excited that her day at work was ending. She was going up to the family cabin with her fiance, younger sister Katie and this time their parents were not going. Their parents in the past would not let them go to the cabin alone with boys, since Emily and Dan got engaged two weeks ago they had changed their tune. Emily was very excited for this trip she had packed days ahead of time, she even had her 23 year old fiance Dan to do the same. After getting out of work Emily went right home to her parents house. They would not let her and Dan live together till they got married.

Emily hopped into the shower for a quick wash of her small 4 foot 5 inch, 105 pound body.. After went to her room to get dressed, as she looked into the mirror combing her long blonde hair which spilled just past her shoulders. Next she slid on a pink poka dot pair of panties up her athletic toned legs. Then put a pink bra over her B cup breasts. Smiling looking at herself she kept thinking all the cheer leading and sports through high-school and collage paid off, her body was as tone and fit as ever. Smiling down looking her hazel eyes she knew, keeping herself in shape for the upcoming wedding to Dan wouldn't be that bard. Emily put on a pair of jean shorts and a spaghetti strap top also grabbing a jacket if it got cold.

Once dressed Emily go into her car to make the drive up to the family's cabin. Dan was going to pick up Katie after cheer leading practice at school and bring her up. Emily knew Dan could take care of getting Katie there safely they were gonna just leave from practice and change at the cabin. 18 year old Katie is a close copy of Emily body wise they are both athletic builds except Katie stands 4 foot 2 inches has red hair blue eyes and firm C cup breats.

As Emily got closer to the cabin she was taking a trip down memory lane. All she kept thinking was how he surprized her and proposed to her on the night she go the job at the school. They were always so happy together and soon they could live as husband and pulling up the gravel road Emily knew she was almost there. The cabin was in the middle
of no where. At the end of the road was the cabin as she got out of the car Emily noticed the leafs around the cabin stirred up and thought nothing of it. Grabbing her bags from the trunk and walked to the cabin unlocked the door and went to reach for the light. As she did Emily herd the door shut behind her, then felt a hand cover her mouth.

With the hand over her mouth Emily tried the scream but couldn't make much noise. Then she heard a rough voice say "we heard you talking to you girlfriends about you and your sister and fiance coming up here". Looking around Emily noticed the man was not alone there seemed to be a figure in the corner also. Then the first man spoke again "i now lets get this strait right now either you cooperate or we'll kill your fiance, got it?". Emily shook her head yes and then she realized the voice she heard sounded allot like jack from work. Jack creeped her out she felt as if he was always trying to look down her shirt. Jack says to Emily " I'm gonna remove my hand then we are gonna go sit on the couch". With her knees shaking Emily went and sat on the couch, Jack was looking down at her sitting there he could see her firm breasts pushing into her bra and shirt.

Jack sits down next to Emily on the couch. Emily gets a uneasy feeling in her stomach as Jack sits next to her. Just as that happens the man appears from the shadows it's Jack's buddy Bob, he comes out smiling looking at Emily sitting there. Bob still grinning says "
Now what time is your sister and Dan gonna get here?". Choking back a sob Emily says "around 9", Jack and Bob smiled at each other that gives them at least 1 alone with Emily.

 

[bedroomvile8r]

Great start! Keep going!

 

[idont70]

Awesome start. I cant wait for more!

 

[spacer_350]

Good story beginning Bob, like to see you develop this into a multi-chapter romp.

 

[bob202]

Looking down at the frightened girl Bob says to her "Now face away from Jack and put your hands behind your back". Not knowing what they were going to do Emily followed instructions. Jack grabbed the handcuffs from out of his pocket as he saw Emily move her arms behind her back. Grabbing her right wrist Jack rackets the first cuff onto her. Feeling the metal click onto her wrist was a shock for Emily she started to fight as Jack grabbed her left wrist and secured it as well.

Bob then walked in front of the scared girl looking down at her he says "let me help you to your feet sweetie". Emily didn't know what they had planned for her as she let Bob help her into a standing position. Bob was standing behind her caressing her shoulders as he pulled her closer to him. Emily could feel the firm bulge in his pants pressing into her cuffed hands. She was pretty sure what they hand in mind her her, Emily started to pull and jerk helplessly at her cuffed hands and to no anvil. Bob holds her tight licks her ear and gently says "if you keep this up Dan won;t make it past the from door". Bob could tell he stuck a nerve she almost instantly stopped pulling on the cuffs. Jack was watching the show as he saw Bob's hands slip down form her shoulders down and around front to her breasts. Bob was getting a good feel over her top and bra, Making him harder as he groped her.

As this was going on Bob asks Emily "so tell me what have you and lover boy done in bed?". Emily was speechless at the questions she choked back a sob as Bob was making her nipples her through her bra and said "Nothing...We are waiting till our marriage". Bob knowing her had her in a good spot lets his hands wander down her body over her taunt stomach and to her shorts. Fumbling for the button on her denim shorts Bob opens them and pulls them down to her feet, Adding "Step out" to Emily as he reaches her shoes. Bob stands back up looking at her poka dot panties as he reaches into his pocket to pull out a knife. Spinning Emily around Bob says "Stay still I don't want to cut you" as he puts the blade at the bottom of her top and cuts it in half. Next he cuts each strap off her shoulder, Emily is left sobbing in the room standing handcuffed with nothing but her pink bra and pink poka dot panties on.

 

[bob202]

With Emily standing barley covered and Bob in front of her, He says "your gonna hit your knees bitch or Dan's gonna need a chair". Emily heard whats bob said gasped and said "oh my god no" as Bob was pushing down on her shoulders. Emily was struggling as Bob was trying to push her down, Bob reminded her as to what was at stake here "If you don't we'll kill Dan in front of you". Hearing this brought her back to attention she sobbed and said "No please" and bend her knees as she allowed Bob to lower her to her knees. With a sobbing tear stained face and shaking lips. Bob unzipped his pants grabbed his hard cock and pushed it towards Emily's face. Bob's cock rubbed over her cheek as Emily turned her head.

Watching this happen Jack slipped in Behind Emily, Kneeling down behind her. Jack put his hands onto Emily's head and turned it back towards Bob, Bending down towards her ears Jack said "if you suck him good we won't hurt Dan, and remember no teeth". Jack reached a hand up to her face grabbed her chin and pushed down telling Emily "open wide Emily". Jack held her mouth and head as Bob placed his cock on Emily's lips. Emily sobbed as he pushed his cock into her mouth, A helpless moan could be head as he fed her more cock. Jack was enjoying grinding his body up against Emily's tight ass. Emily could feel his cock get hard through her panties.

Here Emily was kneeling on a floor with a cock in her mouth. Hands cuffed helplessly behind her back. Stripped down to her bra and panties, While jack has his hands tangled through her long blonde hair as he held Emily's head for his friend to fuck. They both heard sobbing moans as Bob sliding his cock in and out of her sweet mouth. Bob was harder then ever looking down at the sobbing girl, her eyes were closed and his cock in her mouth streched around her soft red lips.

 

[bob202]

Sobbing as Bob's cock sawed back and forth between her lips, Emily moaned and her eyes glazed with tears. She found herself thinking this her first sexual encounter should not go this way. Emily had decided that she would do what ever it took to keep her sister and Dan from harm. Feeling the pre-cum leaking into her mouth Emily screamed and tried to pull her head away. Jack held her head firm saying "swallow it all", as he pushed her head forwards as Bob exploded in her mouth.


Crying and with no escape Emily was forced to swallow the slime Bob had just blown into her mouth. Bob could see her throat moving taking down his cum. As he finished Bob pulled his cock from Emily's mouth. Jack let go of Emily's head and sat down on the coach next to her. Jack looked over at the sobbing girl and said "don't think your done yet, come over here and take my cock down your throat". Emily was speachless they wanted her to do it again, Jack reached over to her shoulder and turned her towards him.

With the girl facing him Jack reminded her "Dan should be here soon, shall we break his knees?". That was enough to get Emily going she bend her body and leaned down towards hick dick. This was hard for her to control with her hands cuffed behind her back. As Emily wrapped her soft lips on his cock Jack grabbed her hair pushed down and said "take it all".

 

[bob202]

Sobbing as Emily felt Jack push her head down onto his cock was a whole new horror for her. Jack let her take it all in then said "Now you do the work up and down like a good girl". Emily knew they would hurt Dan if she didn't do as the asked. She braced her knees against the coach and started to raise and lower her sweet mouth up and down his shaft. All the years of sports had worked in Emily's favor here with such a fit body she was able to work the cock in her mouth without the use of her cuffed hands. Jack was enjoying her warm soft mouth on his dick, soon he was ready to blow. Grabbing her head he said to her "now take it all the way in and swallow what I give you". Emily moaned in defeat as she slid his cock to the back of her throat, as soon as she did that Jacks cock emptied a huge load of cum down the throat. Emily was choking as the smile slid down her throat into her stomach. Once he was finished Jack pulled out of Emily's mouth, wiped his cock off on her hair and let the girl fall to the floor.

Knowing that Dan and Katie would be there soon the decided to secure Emily. Jack walked over to Emily leaned down and said "let's get up and take you to the bedroom, and remember Dan will be here soon". Emily let Jack lift her to her feet. Walking to the bedroom Jack opened the door walked her over to the bed ans said hold still. As she was standing there Jack uncuffed one of her hands. He then pulled her hands around the front of her and refastened them together. As the was going on Bob walked into the room holding a rope in his hand. Jack pushed Emily towards the bed and said "Lay back and lift your arms". Emily left herself fall back onto the bed. Just as she raised her arms Bob grabbed them and tied the rope between the headboard and the cuffs locking her to the bed. Jack then grabbed her feet and pulled her till her hands were stretched tight above her. What a great sight the guys had a athletic trim girl covered in only her bra and panties laying helplessly stretched out before them.

 

[PantyThief]

Great story so far!

 

[spacer_350]

Fantastic... but you should try running a spell check-if your WP program provides for it. It slightly breaks the flow when I run into a word misspelled or more commonly the wrong word for what you want to say. But Hey! I'm more a lurker than a contributing member. You do the creative bit and I'll figure it out.

 

[bob202]

Emily could feel the bed start to sink on the side, she looked over and saw that Jack was climbing onto the bed. Jack worked his was up and laid himself next to Emily. Jack takes his hand and starts to grope Emily breast trough her bra. Emily's nipples started to harden as he was doing this, the unwanted attention to her breast was causing her to strain and pull at the cuff. Jack softly says to her "just be god and let me have a feel", he then let his hand run down her firm stomach to her poka dot panties. Knowing he didn't want to strip her till Dan could watch he ran his hand on the outside of the panties. Emily was sobbing and pleading "please leave me alone I'm saving myself for Dan". Grinning at Emily Jack was gonna keep playing with her till he heard a car door close. Both Bob and Jack knew the Dan and Katie were here, Bob ripped off a piece of duct tape they had left in the bedroom and covered Emily's mouth. Emily heard the door also and tried to scream but the tape on her mouth prevented it. Bob said in her ear "keep quite don't make us hurt them" Emily knew that he meant it and kept quite as she her Dan and Katie enter the cabin.

Hearing Katie yell "were here", they both walked in set down their stuff shut and locked the door. Katie and Dan both picked up their bags and headed towards the bedroom. Katie took her bag to her bedroom and Dan headed towards his, As Dan walked in the light was off. Dan made his was past the door as he heard it shut then a knife was pressed to his neck. Jack had the knife to Dan's neck as he said "not a word or you'll die understand". Jack felt Dan nod in defeat as he was thinking this was just a robbery. Jack then said "put your hands behind your back", as Dan did this Bob clamped another pair of cuff onto his hands. Jack then escorted Dan to a chair they left in the room. Jack told him "sit down" once he was seated Bob took a piece of rope and tied Dan to the chair, Jack ripped off another piece of tape and covered Dan's mouth.

Now that Emily and Dan were secure they waited for Katie to come in before they would turn the light on again. Katie dropped her bag in her room and made her way back towards Emily and Dan's room. At the door she noticed it was shut and the light was off wanting to have fun with them she opened the door and was about to say surprize. But she was cut off by a hand over her mouth and all she got out was "surppppppp". Bob had his hand over her mouth as she struggled to get away. Bob said to her "stand still and follow directions of you don't want Emily or Dan hurt." Both Dan and Emily yelled into their taped mouths as they heard Katie get grabbed by Bob. Katie heard the muffled yells of her sister and Dan.

Katie was standing in the room with Bob's hand over her mouth scared not sure what was going on. She also figured they were being robbed, since the lights were off and she could not see Emly or Dan. Katie felt the man standing behind her she felt as if he was trying to look down her cheer leading top. Bob said to Jack "Bring me the cuffs" Katie could make out the shiny chrome of the cuffs in the moon light. Jack handed Bob the cuffs with one hand on her mouth Bob peeled back her right hand and cuffed it, then repeated the same with the left. Once Katie was secure Jack walked over to the lights and flipped them on. The look on Dan's face as he saw Emily on the bed was priceless he started to yell into his taped mouth. Katie saw Emily also and said "what did you do to my sister you creeps". Emily was on the bed pulling helplessly at her cuffs as she saw Katie and Bob standing right behind her. Bob replied to Katie "nothing were not gonna do to you too".

 

[bob202]

Katie heard Bob's words and began to try and twist and squirm, But Bob grabbed her and held her tight. Emily and Dan were both still making muffled sounds into their tapped mouths and struggling to free them self's. Jack walked over to the bed Emily was on , he asks her "what will you do to save your sister?" as he was reaching out he peels off her tape. Emily felt the tape ripped off her mouth, She feared what they would do to Katie and decided to answer quickly. Sobbing as she looked at her sister then at Dan, Emily says "Please don't hurt her, Whats do you want from me?". Both Jack and Bob knew Emily was a virgin so they decided to see how far they would be able to push her thinking she would save her cherry.

Jack sits down on the bed next to Emily, running his hand up her legs over her flat stomach to her bra cover breasts. Katie was starting to squirm in Bob arms so he decided it would be best to tie her up. Bob walked her over to a chair and said "Sit down". As Katie sat in the chair Bob took another piece of rope and tied it around her waist to the chair. Jack was running his hands over Emily's breast he then slipped a hands under the cups and pulled them over her breasts. With her nipples exposed Jack lowered his head to her breast squeezing and kneeding as he began to flick her nipple with his mouth. Emily began to pull away and try to twist out of her cuffs till she heard a loud thump. Emily looked up in time to see Bob hit Dan square in the gut doubling him over in pain. Bob looked at Emily and said "Play nice or I'll hit him again". Emily stopped struggling as Jack continued his assault on her nipples. Jack raised his head looking Emily in the eyes and said " I know your a virgin would you offer your ass to save your cherry?"

 

[bob202]

Emily was taken back at what Jack had just said. Thinking that at least she would be a virgin at their wedding Emily sobs "Yes". Knowing he has her in a good spot Jack smiles into her eyes and says "You better follow along or this is what will happen". Emily heard Katie yell "Noooo stop" just in time to see Bob rip open her cheer leading top and start to play with her bra covered tits. Knowing there was no choice now Emily looks up at Jack to say "I will please leave Katie alone". Jack then takes this as a sign they are ready to being, Sliding his hands down Emily's tight body he feels her tense and sob as he loop his thumbs into her poka dot panties. Jack says "now be a good girl and lift your ass as I pull your panties off". Dan was begging to get his scenes back as he heard Jack and was yelling into his duct tapes mouth. Bob turns to Dan and says "sit there and be quiet or we will make sure you be out forever". Dan took his words to heart knowing he could do nothing to help the girls and nodded his head in defeat. Over on the bed Jack slowly pulls down Emily's panties revealing her snatch to a man for the first time. After taking her panties all the down and past her knees Jack pulls them off one leg at a time, throwing them into the corner. Crawling back over Emily's body Jack says to her "Lift your legs like a good girl and get ready".

 

[bob202]

Emily sobbed as she heard Jack say "lift your legs like a good girl and get ready". The poor girl knew Jack was ready to plow into her. Laying on her back with her hands cuffed above her head, Legs spread with Jack between them there is nothing she could do without getting Katie or Dan hurt. Jack had decided he wasn't going to stretch her out by playing with her ass. He spits onto his hand and rubs it around his rock hard cock. Emily was tensing her body with every move he made. Leaning down next to her ear Jack says "tell me your ready for me to fuck your ass". Lining his cock up to her asshole Jack feels her tense and wiggle her tight body. Not wanting to wait much longer he says " Bob if Emily won't play nice why don't you slap Dan around". Hearing that made Emily stop squirming and plead " please don't hurt Dan, please fuck my ass" the words must have been hard for her to say sobbed and sniffed as she said them. Jack ready to go once her heard Emily he started to push his cock into her virgin ass.

 

[bob202]

Emily was sobbing as Jack lined his cock up with her ass. She began to squirm as she felt the head pass her tight ring. There was nothing she could do but lay there , She was cuffed in place and they threatened to hurt Katie if she resisted. Once the head breached her ring Emily yelled out in pain "Noooo Please stoop it's too big". As Jack fed a little more cock up her ass he smiled down at her and said "I can stop with you if you want me to take Katie instead". Emily knew she did not have a choice in the matter and sobbed as she said "Please fuck my a..s...s....". Jack kept pushing into her tight passage way until he felt his balls hit up against her cunt. He knew he was all the way up her ass at that point. With a ear to ear grin Jack says to Emily "Now that you took all my cock get ready for your fucking". Jack knew it was going to hurt Emily as he pulled back his cock, He felt the intense tightness of her once virgin ass grip him. Not caring about the pain he was causing her Jack put both hands on Emily's shoulders, Looked down at her tear stained face and rammed his cock all the way back up her ass. Emily grunted with pain as Jack was pulling his cock back, She wimpered "Please go slooowww" as he forced his cock back up her ass. Jack repeated the same thing five or six times till she loosened up a little. After Jack felt she was loose enough he began to piston his dick in and out her her ass riding her as hard as he could with each thrust. Jack could hear his balls smack her twat as he was reaming her hole. Emily would sob as he did this every so often she would plead with Jack "Please not so hard". That was a turn on to Jack and he would ream her harder, Jack then felt his cock ready to blow and wanted to humiliate Emily once more before he shot his load. Jack asked Emily "Were should I cum up your ass or in your mouth and don't forget to say please". Both options were revolting to Emily, but she knew she had to pick one. With pure agony in her voice she wimped "In my ass please". Just as Jack heard the words his cock swelled up and he shot his overflowing load right up her virgin ass. Emily groaned as she felt it in her bowels, It burned where Jack had ripped her.

 

[bob202]

Bob watched with a grin on his face as Jack plowed away at Emily's virgin ass. Bob knew he would have his fun but it was time to get the girls ready for bed. Emily was trying to turn her head into the pillow and sob as she felt Jack cum drip out her reamed ass hole. Bob looked over at Jack and said "it's getting late lets get these girls ready for bed". The looks on on Katie and Emily's face was priceless as they realized that the men were not just going to leave. Dan shrunk his head down also at the news but knew better then to do anything. Bob was ready for his turn but had to play it cool, He said "just to make sure we do not have any issues tonight we are gonna drag Dan into the closet and Katie will sleep in her room". Knowing that they had better let the girls do their business Bob unties the rope around Katie's waist and says "I'm gonna uncuff your hand go to the bathroom and do your stuff, Then I'll lock you up in your room and remember no funny business ". Katie stood up when the rope was untied she knew better then to try anything as Bob unlocked one cuff. Katie made her was into the bathroom, She was glad to have a few moments alone as she drained her bladder. Katie found it hard to use the bathroom with the handcuff on her left hand. Once she was done Katie walked back out to see Bob was waiting for her. Bob grabbed her left shoulder spun her around and refastened the cuff. Bob then grabbed the duct tape ripped off a piece and taped her mouth. As the tape was being applied her her lips Bob said "Don't want you to make noise and call for help, As long as you behave no one will touch you". Almost laughing Bob knew that was a lie but what ever they could tell the girls to get more cooperation was always a good thing. Bob led Katie out the door down the hall into her room. Bob told Katie to "Go sit on the bed" as he locked the door and drug the dresser in front of it.

Emily was scared to death as all this was going on, Jack calmed her down by saying "Katie is going to sleep down the hall be good to me tonight and she will be fine. Jack wanted to clean Emily up a bit also so he said "I'm going to untie the rope go into the bathroom clean yourself up and don't do anything stupid if you want Dan to live. Emily made her way into the bathroom, with her hands cuffed in front of her grabbed a towel wet it a bit and wiped her sore ass. She found this part very humiliating to have had her ass raped and then to try to clean it off. Emily's bra kept falling down her shoulders to her cuffed hands as she was wiping herself. Emily then hit the can to do her business, But before she left the bathroom she almost drank a tube of toothpaste to get the foul cum taste out her mouth. Emily rinsed her teeth took a drink and headed back to Jack. Jack told her "Lay down on the bed face down hands above your head". Emily climbed onto the bed raised her hands and almost face planted the pillow in the process. Jack grabbed her cuffed hands and retied them to the headboard. Jack got off the bed opens the closet door and drags Dan into the closet before he shuts the door he tells him "I'm gonna have another go with Emily hope you can hear". Dan groans into the tape but can do nothing as Jack shuts the closet door and then props a chair under the knob. Jack then walks over to the room door locks it, turns back towards the bed. On his way to the bed Jack grabs the duct tape rips off a piece tells Emily to "Turn your head to the side" as she does he covers her mouth with the tape. Knowing he could use a rest he crawls up next to he on the bed feeling her squirm as he laid with her. Jack tells Emily "better be nice remember we have Katie, lets try to take a rest " that was enough to get Emily to stop squirming she just laid there and sobbed as Jack rubbed her young firm breast as he slowly drifted of to sleep.

As this was going on Katie was sitting on the bed staring at Bob, She looked very good sitting there with her cheer leading outfit on. There was not much she could do with her hands cuffed behind her back and mouth taped. Bob walked over to Katie and says "Now I know you want to help your sister out tonight be nice to me or she will be in a world of pain, do you understand?". Katie looked up with tears in her eyes and nodded for the first time she realized she to would be violated. Wanting to know more about her Bob said "I'm gonna ask you a few questions nod your head yes or no". His first question "Do you have a boy friend?" she nods no second question "Have you ever sucked a dick?" she nods no, knowing she probably a virgin he decided to end his questions with "Are you a virgin" she nods yes. Once that was out of the way he says "We got stopped earlier when I was playing with you on one will stop us this time". Bob pushed on her shoulders and told her to "Lay back" as she did Katie felt the cuffs dig into her wrists.

 

[bob202]

As Katie was laying on her back looking up at Bob's grinning face tears began to fall. Katie wasn't sure what Bob was going to do but she knew he would likely be using one of her virgin holes.

Once Bob had pushed Katie back onto her cuffed wrists. He crawled up onto the bed and proceeded nto swing his leg over Katies body so he was straddling her chest , hooking his legs on either side of her hips. Bob leaned his body forward so he could whisper right into Katies ear... "Remember you promised to be nice to me"..

Letting the words stew in her head Bob the looks at her tear stained cheeks and says " I'll be nice and let you choose the hole I use".... Bob runs his hand up Katies leg under her cheerleader skirt, he rubs his palm over her mound and says "how about this virgin hole?"... Katie shakes her head NO... Bob then lowers his hand and cups her ass giving her cheek a firm squeeze... He then askes " Do you want to take it up your virgin ass like Emily?"...Katie again shakes her head No....

Knowing there is just one orfice left for him to use Bob pulls his hand out from under Katie's cheerleading skirt and brings it up to her duct taped mouth. Giving her cheeks a decent squeeze Bob says to Katie.." I'm assuming you want my cock in your virgin mouth then?"

Katie was taken back at Bob's bold assumption but knew she would have little choice as she nodded her head Yes... Bob smiled with glee as Katie accepted her fate. Bob still holding onto Katie's cheeks looks down as her tears began to flow harder and says " I'm going to peel the tape off don't make.any noises to alert Emily or you'll be sorry".

Katie knew Bob and Jack would hurt them to get what they wanted,.so she sqealed behind the tape and nodded in compliance. Bob took that as a sign Katie was ready for him, Bob reached down and grabbed the corner of the duct tape. He slowly began to peel the tape back from Katie's lips. Once the tape was completely off her lips Katie licked her lips to wet them after being sealed in for hours. Bob saw her little tounge move and said "Just think how that will feel on my cock".

Katie hearing those words teared up and quietly sobbed. Bob smiled down at her and said " How about you give me a nice cheerleader smile and ask me to suck me dry?". Knowing again she really didn't have much of a choice Katie made the best fake smile she could. Before she got any words out Bob noticed for the first time she wore braces.. He quickly said "Make sure you keep those railroad tracks away from.my dick"... That was enough to get Katie to sob harder and try to wiggle out from under Bob she has always been very self conscious about her metallic braces....

 

[godlike]

Wow, fantastic story so far... I am so glad you picked it back up after all these years, i had not read it.... and now I want to hear what more you have planned..... Great job, i hope you continue it....

 

[godlike]

Still waiting for a continuation of this wonderful story... one of my favorites so far and has so much more to be heard... hope bob202 continues this masterpiece....

 

[Mad Gerald]

Nice like they say you need to proof read this or use a spell checker but all in all its a good story, just waiting for more - grin