Thank you, that is good advice. Only, I doubt it will work with me. I'm obsessed with my stories, so if I want to do decent work I can't think about them at all.
It's good to focus on the detail, it allows me to claim the rp is practice for work.
(Although I once typed "intercourse" instead of "watercourse" in a work document, which made my boss laugh)
Ha, I just realised how far she flew, when you knocked her into the house - from across the street. I'm sorry I didn't realise sooner, or I would've described the flight in detail.