I've been a bit busy as of late. Real world issues and my posting plans have come into conflict. Thank you for an invitation to read your story / short story. If you are sincere regarding an honest review (and, I know no other way to give a review), I will do so? Please keep in mind that English is my second language. Texacan is my first language.
In closing, may I humbly suggest that you are trying too hard. This is a great little close knit community. You are here. Therefore, by definition, you a part of that community. With time, your familiarity may be judged to be just an integral part of your personality and openly accepted. Again, I humbly suggest that you tread lightly on the thin ice and give it some time.
However, never expect that we will ever take warm showers together.
With my respect,
HRH1948
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