Lauren and Haley - Rape Board

Raperman69 · 09-01-2012, 04:21 PM

This is my first post so feedback, negative and positive, is appreciated.

Part 1

"That was our turn you fucking idiot! The boss'll kill us if we mess up this job." Zack says. "I'm just the driver you are the map reader" Craig says. The FedEx truck turns around and pulls into the high school parking lot, the two men each grab a package from the back and walk to the front door where they are let in by the secretary. They then ask for directions to the auditorium and as they arrive they can hear an assembly in progress. "good, they're all in there. Just like the boss said they would be" Craig whispers to Zack. The two open their packages and pull out guns. They then burst through the doors and Craig yells "nobody fucking move! We need every girl here to come with us." Within 5 minutes every girl was lined up single file and Zack and Craig were inspecting each one "damn I'm getting hard just looking at all them" Zack whispers to Craig "I know but the boss only wants two". As soon as the men laid eyes on two of the girls they knew which ones they were going to take. One of the girls was 5'4 with brown hair going just past her shoulders, stunning size c breasts and an ass that would make any guy who looked at it hard. The other one was about 5'2 with blonde hair going just past her perfect boobs. They were easily a size d, maybe larger and she had legs that seemed to go on forever. "You two, name and age" Craig demands "I'm Haley and this is Lauren" the blonde says "were both 18". "Alright come with us. The rest of you go back in the auditorium" Zack instructs. When they get to the truck the two girls are tied and gagged and thrown in the back. They then pull out of the parking lot and drive for 15 minutes until they reach a farm with at least 20 acres.*

The girls are put in dog kennels and Zack lectures them "you will not speak unless spoken to, and you will do what anyone here instructs you to do. If you don't obey you will be punished severely. Now you two will meet your master, both of you take off your cloths and get back in the kennel." Lauren immediately strips down to nothing but Haley doesn't move. "well, well it looks like punishment is in order. You can do the honors Zack" Craig says with a smirk.*

spacer_350 · 09-01-2012, 04:53 PM

Nice intro, good writing. Let's have some more! Lots more!

09-01-2012, 04:21 PM	#1
Raperman69 Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2012 Location: New York Posts: 3 Reputation: 10	Lauren and Haley This is my first post so feedback, negative and positive, is appreciated. Part 1 "That was our turn you fucking idiot! The boss'll kill us if we mess up this job." Zack says. "I'm just the driver you are the map reader" Craig says. The FedEx truck turns around and pulls into the high school parking lot, the two men each grab a package from the back and walk to the front door where they are let in by the secretary. They then ask for directions to the auditorium and as they arrive they can hear an assembly in progress. "good, they're all in there. Just like the boss said they would be" Craig whispers to Zack. The two open their packages and pull out guns. They then burst through the doors and Craig yells "nobody fucking move! We need every girl here to come with us." Within 5 minutes every girl was lined up single file and Zack and Craig were inspecting each one "damn I'm getting hard just looking at all them" Zack whispers to Craig "I know but the boss only wants two". As soon as the men laid eyes on two of the girls they knew which ones they were going to take. One of the girls was 5'4 with brown hair going just past her shoulders, stunning size c breasts and an ass that would make any guy who looked at it hard. The other one was about 5'2 with blonde hair going just past her perfect boobs. They were easily a size d, maybe larger and she had legs that seemed to go on forever. "You two, name and age" Craig demands "I'm Haley and this is Lauren" the blonde says "were both 18". "Alright come with us. The rest of you go back in the auditorium" Zack instructs. When they get to the truck the two girls are tied and gagged and thrown in the back. They then pull out of the parking lot and drive for 15 minutes until they reach a farm with at least 20 acres.* The girls are put in dog kennels and Zack lectures them "you will not speak unless spoken to, and you will do what anyone here instructs you to do. If you don't obey you will be punished severely. Now you two will meet your master, both of you take off your cloths and get back in the kennel." Lauren immediately strips down to nothing but Haley doesn't move. "well, well it looks like punishment is in order. You can do the honors Zack" Craig says with a smirk.*

09-01-2012, 04:53 PM	#2
spacer_350 Member Join Date: Mar 2010 Posts: 67 Reputation: 928	Nice intro, good writing. Let's have some more! Lots more!