A poem writen for my love - Rape Board

hornybisexualbitch · 04-20-2007, 09:14 PM

A Hole Filled

I had a hole in my heart,
A black empty spot where others threatened to rip my world apart.
They didnâ€™t care or bother to try,
Then my life changed with your simple word of â€œhiâ€

â€œ__________is typing a messageâ€ it said below,
While my eyes searched for the message the screen was about to bestow.
On and on we talked for hours,
All the while my barrier cowers.

We talk and laugh as our affections grows,
Words spill and with it love flows.
Into my mind happiness creeps,
While at the same time out of my heart doubt seeps.

Those three little words fill the screen along with my heart's hole,
Putting you in my life as a new role.
â€œI LOVE YOU,â€ â€œI LOVE YOUâ€ I type and repeat,
My hearts doubts diminishing in defeat.

I sit there and type, my heart swollen with love,
While I float on the wings of a dove.
My heart rate increase,
As my breathing ceases.

Your sweet words fill my mind
At the same time true love and bliss is what I find.
___________________ I love you with all my heart,
Thank you for filling the hole others once ripped apart.

i blanked out his name, after a while i may put it in if he wishes, but do you think he will like it? I love him alot i really do

, and this poem is so true.

Andering REDDSON · 04-20-2007, 09:17 PM

¿Your lover? He should appreciate it… Even if he doesn’t get it. (Males never understand… We just smile because you know what you meant…)

my dark side · 04-20-2007, 09:31 PM

Huni, if he doesn't like it then there must be something wrong. I thought it was great and i could tell it truely did come from your heart.

Good luck with the whole thing

sindyloo · 04-20-2007, 09:46 PM

What a Beautiful message from your heart and soul!

He will love it as much as you loved too write it!!

GOOD LUCK Honey and all my best to you Both!!

hornybisexualbitch · 04-20-2007, 10:02 PM

aww thanks guys, i love the comments, and yes it truely came from my heart, i couldnt sleep one night and he was on my mind, i am a writer so i devided to write something for him, i really love him alot, i met him on here actually,

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I LOVE YOU BABE

, he knows who he is, if he decides to share who he is then, i will let him, if not then i will keep him to myself

WEIRD1976 · 04-20-2007, 10:27 PM

Thanks babe.
Love u too.

Hellcat · 04-21-2007, 03:19 AM

Beautiful and truly heartfelt sentiments huni... I know what its like to experience that moment in time that flips you on your head and changes the course of your life forever.... all my very best wishes for you both

tnc4fun · 04-21-2007, 05:26 PM

It would melt my shorts if it were written for me. I'm sure it will be much appreciated.

WEIRD1976 · 04-21-2007, 06:45 PM

It sure is!

hornybisexualbitch · 04-21-2007, 07:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by WEIRD1976

It sure is!

i am glad babe, i love you

OldPerv · 04-21-2007, 08:13 PM

...and I would be more than privelleged,
...to be asked to give the bride away.

I think you make a more than beautiful couple.

P.S. ...the poetry is heart felt and beautiful.

"W"..might try a responce.
It doesn't matter if it makes sence.
The medium is the message.

Luv ya both...

hornybisexualbitch · 04-21-2007, 10:54 PM

well damn oldperv thanks, are you spying on me, lol, dont i feel specail.lol.
anyway thanks oldperv, means alot from you, remembering our good times;-)

04-20-2007, 09:14 PM	#1
hornybisexualbitch Daughter of Jasmine Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: South Carolina Posts: 1,114 Reputation: 2956	A poem writen for my love A Hole Filled I had a hole in my heart, A black empty spot where others threatened to rip my world apart. They didnâ€™t care or bother to try, Then my life changed with your simple word of â€œhiâ€ â€œ__________is typing a messageâ€ it said below, While my eyes searched for the message the screen was about to bestow. On and on we talked for hours, All the while my barrier cowers. We talk and laugh as our affections grows, Words spill and with it love flows. Into my mind happiness creeps, While at the same time out of my heart doubt seeps. Those three little words fill the screen along with my heart's hole, Putting you in my life as a new role. â€œI LOVE YOU,â€ â€œI LOVE YOUâ€ I type and repeat, My hearts doubts diminishing in defeat. I sit there and type, my heart swollen with love, While I float on the wings of a dove. My heart rate increase, As my breathing ceases. Your sweet words fill my mind At the same time true love and bliss is what I find. ___________________ I love you with all my heart, Thank you for filling the hole others once ripped apart. i blanked out his name, after a while i may put it in if he wishes, but do you think he will like it? I love him alot i really do , and this poem is so true. __________________ So...who missed me? Smiles are contagious, share one, the small things can brighten someones day.

04-20-2007, 09:46 PM	#4
sindyloo Privileged Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 2,178 Reputation: 34844	What a Beautiful message from your heart and soul! He will love it as much as you loved too write it!! GOOD LUCK Honey and all my best to you Both!! __________________ Tommy Loy, the cabin boy, The dirty little nipper, He filled his ass With broken glass And cirumcized the skipper!

04-20-2007, 10:02 PM	#5
hornybisexualbitch Daughter of Jasmine Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: South Carolina Posts: 1,114 Reputation: 2956	aww thanks guys, i love the comments, and yes it truely came from my heart, i couldnt sleep one night and he was on my mind, i am a writer so i devided to write something for him, i really love him alot, i met him on here actually, . I LOVE YOU BABE , he knows who he is, if he decides to share who he is then, i will let him, if not then i will keep him to myself __________________ So...who missed me? Smiles are contagious, share one, the small things can brighten someones day.

04-20-2007, 10:27 PM	#6
WEIRD1976 Privileged Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: HELLVILLE Posts: 157 Reputation: 58	Thanks babe. Love u too. __________________ BE OPEN MINDED TO EVERYTHING AND EVERYONE!

04-21-2007, 03:19 AM	#7
Hellcat At Rest Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 1,808 Reputation: 1841	Beautiful and truly heartfelt sentiments huni... I know what its like to experience that moment in time that flips you on your head and changes the course of your life forever.... all my very best wishes for you both __________________ â€œIf you should die before me, take my hand and ask if you could bring along a friendâ€

04-20-2007, 09:17 PM	#2
Andering REDDSON Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: R/Bâ€™s cyber-Auschwitz Posts: 609 Reputation: 1028	¿Your lover? He should appreciate it… Even if he doesn’t get it. (Males never understand… We just smile because you know what you meant…)

04-20-2007, 09:31 PM	#3
my dark side Banned Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Away from here Posts: 2,038 Reputation: 1051	Huni, if he doesn't like it then there must be something wrong. I thought it was great and i could tell it truely did come from your heart. Good luck with the whole thing

04-21-2007, 05:26 PM	#8
tnc4fun Privileged Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Maryland, USA Posts: 203 Reputation: 453	It would melt my shorts if it were written for me. I'm sure it will be much appreciated. __________________ The principles of lust are easy to understand, Do what you feel, feel until the end. The principles of lust are burned into your mind, Do what you want, do it until you find...love. Basic instincts, social life Paradoxes side by side Don't submit to stupid rules Be yourself and nobody's fool Don't accept average habits Open your heart and push the limits. The path of excess leads to the Tower of Wisdom. St. Michael Cretu

04-21-2007, 06:45 PM	#9
WEIRD1976 Privileged Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: HELLVILLE Posts: 157 Reputation: 58	It sure is! __________________ BE OPEN MINDED TO EVERYTHING AND EVERYONE!

04-21-2007, 08:13 PM	#11
OldPerv Privileged Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 215 Reputation: 280	I must confess...I've been watching you two... ...and I would be more than privelleged, ...to be asked to give the bride away. I think you make a more than beautiful couple. P.S. ...the poetry is heart felt and beautiful. "W"..might try a responce. It doesn't matter if it makes sence. The medium is the message. Luv ya both... __________________ Slow and easy...I want to see it in your eyes.

04-21-2007, 10:54 PM	#12
hornybisexualbitch Daughter of Jasmine Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: South Carolina Posts: 1,114 Reputation: 2956	well damn oldperv thanks, are you spying on me, lol, dont i feel specail.lol. anyway thanks oldperv, means alot from you, remembering our good times;-) __________________ So...who missed me? Smiles are contagious, share one, the small things can brighten someones day.