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InnocentVirgin · 02-07-2009, 08:37 AM

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Originally Posted by ElliAus

Just found your story
Ill read it more thoroughly later but its great.
just the right balance of fear, brutality and foreboding

don't worry about the end
just give it an unexpected twist then bring all the strands together quickly at that point

dramatic finishes are better than just trailing away.

It takes a lot of time and effort to write stories of substance. W all love you for that.

you are a great mentor and writer

Elly

I'm flattered. Very flattered you think so.

Thank you.

InnocentVirgin · 02-23-2009, 02:19 PM

sorry for delay.. little bit of a scare here..

I'll be back to write when things quiet ^^.

prisonerslave · 02-23-2009, 09:23 PM

i'll wait for as long as it takes IV!

rosielawson · 07-29-2011, 03:00 PM

Same here. We Miss YOU!

02-23-2009, 09:23 PM	#63
prisonerslave Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: In your cage Posts: 185 Reputation: 1374	i'll wait for as long as it takes IV! __________________ Russian Roulette is not the same with out a gun And Baby when it's love If it's not rough, it isn't fun!

02-23-2009, 02:19 PM	#62
InnocentVirgin Banned Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: USA via Europe Posts: 366 Reputation: 3911	sorry for delay.. little bit of a scare here.. I'll be back to write when things quiet ^^.

07-29-2011, 03:00 PM	#64
rosielawson Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 102 Reputation: 1067	Same here. We Miss YOU!