Yum.
This story is beautifull written, The only suggestion I could make was more detail and description of the pain of her back side being taken but my over all comment for this is "YUM!"
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Nails tear at raw flesh,cutting deep,
tossing and turning, quivering with delight as I weep.
Eyes wide open and mouth taped shut breathing barely,
hands tied up.
A loving heart completly ravished, a home for two,taught to share.
Blood runs thick on skin so pale
and just like my soul,body bare.
Tears are dry, mascara stale,
My twisted fairy tale.
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