Loved it for the most part. Very life like or realistic in the description of how the build up and how it was done. Love the realistic true to life parts like this wont work and you cant do that plus great fear in real life getting caught scenarios. The only part that I personally didn't like (which is just MY opinion) was the shoving of all the pens, sharpies, etc up her ass. It seemed TOO much and over the top. Would have rathered just the ass rape and then maybe a face or pussy rape for the hell of it. Would have loved to have had her wake up and experience it awake as an ultimate conquering of her. Love the phone part sending to all her contacts. Loved the ruined her life by ripping up term paper and deleting everything. Overall, great job.
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