Hm. I liked this.
Again. Very well done. Poor thing should realize reading about being hit with a riding crop is far different than actually being slapped by one.
And I know exactly that look she saw. Gets me every time. I like to see a man make that transition. Jaw tenses... pupils dialate... Brows narrow and the eyes turn to ice and in some cases color lightens. And it feels like they stare through your body and penetrate to your very soul.
So why aren't you writing erotic forced sex novellas and selling them?
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LittleMissVictim
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