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Old 11-21-2008, 08:27 PM   #28
tnthong
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Good story...rather long, but good. Also, I thought, for the most part, the dialogue was pretty realistic, but the girl just seems a little too quite, like she doesn't mind so much or something...overall I enjoyed it, thanks!
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