A couple of days ago I spent an evening looking for stories in the last few pages of these boards, and I found your three stories. Boy am I glad I did! What a coincidence that you bumped it just now.
Your writing is exquisite and the story was very exciting on so many levels, right up until the end I kept getting surprised by the turns of events. It was nice to read a story that didn't end with the victim getting all excited about her situation. I especially liked the relationship between the victim and "the coach"; it seemed to balance on the verge of affection while still being so far from it.
This post got pretty long but I just wanted to applaud good writing!
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