Love the set-up. But I would depict the bride as more innocent, tender, and virginal. Can't imagine a girl kidnapped on her wedding day forced into reluctant/semi-willing orgasms, myself.
I'd have her loathing and detesting everything during the entire terrifying experience. Not only that, but I'd have her kidnapped with her entire bridal party, and turn her and her bridesmaids into my harem!
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