JaniceJ,
Very nice once again. I have not given Rep much lately and can not Rep you now, but I would if it were available to me...
5 Stars though...
Very polished once again and a near flawless edit. Your voice is strong and you can not be new to writing, even though you have just begun to post stories here.
May we look forward to a bit more fullness of description on future efforts?
Please say yes...
With utmost respect for your skill (and something else you've given me that I will only allude to
),
Flesh