Question about order of events
 

Hey all,

I have a quick and simple question and want to get some perspectives. I'm currently writing up a script with a forced/non-consensual scenario. The aggressor does the ol' live the lady's skirt, slide her panties aside, and then takes her. He also tears her blouse open.

Do you have a preference for the blouse being torn before or after penetration? If so, please let me know why.

Thanks!

:skull-bee

To begin with.

Yes, obviously I don't need to see a nipple to stick my dick into her pussy, but it pushes adrenaline up. It prepares her for what is to come. It starts making her feel as an object, and makes her know for sure this is for real, it's no bluff and no game. She will be raped. She will be abused. Only that her attacker is first having some fun at her expense. Tearing the blouse apart, and then stare at her for some seconds, go straight to bite a nipple (softly or harshly, according to the setting you will develop) will get her to scream and try to push me away. Time for real submission to start. Maybe slap her face, maybe tie her wrists... Maybe just show she's too tiny to counter a big man from having his way on her.

I think some pulling and ripping open of blouse or top would be required. Foreplay I guess. :)

There are different ways to look at this. You can follow use a group of specific events; grab, throw down, rip lift, penetrate. Or, you can grab, lift, penetrate. The scene can be enhanced by dialog between the two, or by descriptive sentences. I think that it largely depends on the authors style and ability to use language.

I'm thinking of writing a story that starts in the middle of the rape and the girl has flashbacks / memories of how the events started.

I like the idea of flashbacks on the part of the girl. I hope you do write this. It will be interesting to see where you go with her thinking as she feels her rapist inside her.

The movie that got me started with this fantasy was "The Clockwork Orange." Alex cutting away the Mrs. one piece around her breasts and exposing them before the ole in-out, in-out.

Definitely boobies first.

I second the preference of doing that before. How far before depends on the kind of rapist. If he's in for a fast quicky, he may simply rip open the blouse and not much else. Also, the first order that springs to mind for that is: skirt and panties first, blouse second, then penetrate. If he has all the time in the world, he may in fact play with her exposed breasts for a very long time before moving further down.

In my fantasies the victim is always stripped naked first. To me it adds to the psychological torment of the victim, almost like she could equate her clothing to armor in a way and I'm removing one piece at a time to take whatever I want from her.