Way too many exclamation marks, otherwise I love it ^_^

Too many exclamation marks...what're you smokin?

Thbbt, once I get one of my stories up you'll see what I mean.

Oh, you mean your stories are poorly punctuated...

What, you think the best method of punctuation is making every other line sound like the author is shouting at you?

Now that's a total exaggeration! Stern used exclamation marks very well...which is the right way to emphasise excited, loud or angry speech. I should know, I'm a professional author;) :D

agreed...

A professional? Does that automatically male you a good writer? I mean, look at Michael Crichton...

Yes, a published professional who gets paid for writing books...:D And well I'm sure I'm way better than you are!

male you a good writer???

LOL

Love it!

I spun this debate off into it's own thread here in idle talk!:D

I am a she, not a he. And I said I loved the story, one of the only one on the site I really liked so far. I just though the exclamation marks were a little distracting. I had to fix the inflection in my head, you know? I was only making a suggestion.

Also somedude, I'd love to seem some of your bibliography.

i may sound dumb, yes, i know.
but what the hell are you all talking about??LOL!:P

Master's Pet said that Stern's Patient X story had too many exclamation marks...LOL:D

Okay...http://www.fictionwise.com/ebooks/Series650.htm

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*quickly exits the thread to avoid being drawn into the great !!! debate!*

Aww, if only I got to read some. I'll have to order one of your books.

Also, I wouldn't be so quick to say you are better than I am, it's very assumptive.

well they are worth the read, trust me :skull-thu:skull-thu

Thanks for the good review Manda!:D

Actually it's more of presumtive;) And there are excerpts available from those links and I've posted excerpts here on RB!