My First Story

[ns161]

Sweet 18 Princesses
Part 1: Where It All Ends Up

Tyrone finished setting up the card table. It had been a long day but it was worth it. Something to celebrate tonight, his buddy Jeff was finally out of prison after doing 3 years for some stupid petty theft. He never would have been in for that long except he had a few juvenile priors and they had come back to haunt him. But whatever, tonight the crew was going to be together for the first time in six years. Nothing special, just some cards, and Mark was supposedly bringing some porno. But it would be great just to have Jeff out of prison finally.

About an hour later the guys started to show up. The six had been friends since high school. Now in their early 30’s most of them had some run-ins with the law. Four of them had done time in prison, Jeff being the fourth. All of them large, prison chiseled, tattoos, dark black guys. As the guys came in they all grabbed some beers and sat around the card table.

“So Jeff, as the guest of honor you get to deal first” Mark laughed pushing the deck over to him.

“Oh wonderful, that’s what I wanted on my first day of freedom. Playing cards with a bunch of dudes and ugly dudes at that!” Jeff laughed as he started dealing.

Daquan popped his beer. “Well sorry Jeff, but what with Tyrone living out here in the middle of nowhere we’ll have to settle for the porn Mark brought. You did bring it right?”

“Of course I did, you think I want look at you guys all night?”

“Well fuck man, just get it in and start playing it!” Will scowled at his cards, obviously not off to a good start and thinking he wanted at least something to enjoy.

Mark rose from the table and headed over the Tyrones TV and put the DVD on. Mike laughed “Oh God man, not this one again! This is so fucking lame.” On the screen a blonde nurse came on, surrounded by three black men.

“I know man, but I love it, that nurse is so fucking hot” Mark laughed walking back to the table.

“Whatever man, you gotta start getting more variety in your porn habits.” Derek replied rolling his eyes.

The six guys started to play, laughing as the porn played on the TV.


Gayle cursed as the car started to slow even though she was flooring the pedal. She willed the car to speed up and cursed again as the engine gave out. She pulled the car slowly over to the side and tried to start to engine, the car whined, sputtered and died. She cursed one last time.

“Jeez Gayle, I’ve never heard you curse so much in life.” Her friend Janis called from the back seat.

“Yeah, settle down Gayle, its no big deal we can call for help.” Her other friend Briana said as she pulled her cell phone.

The three girls had finally been allowed by their parents to take a road trip, kind of a High School Graduation/18th birthday present for all three of them. It had been fun, they got a little wild, but nothing bad. All three had bright futures and weren’t about to put them in jeopardy by doing something stupid.

Gayle, the driver, was captain of the cheerleading squad, 5’6”, she had hair that was usually described as golden-blonde or honey-blonde. Today she was wearing it in a long loose braid or pony tail, held with a black scrunchie and a few bangs hanging over her forehead. She had creamy skin, and a body to die for. Long, perfectly tapered, athletic legs ending in a round, firm bubble butt with just a little bounce. Because of the cheering she kept herself shaved. An athletic, toned, flat stomach with a royal blue navel piercing. After that you saw perfectly formed, round firm 36C breasts, just a little bounce. Her face was a round oval, pink lips and sparkling crystal blue eyes. Gayle was usually described as “elegant” to her face and “fuck princess” behind her back.

Today, Gayle was wearing a pink blouse which was buttoned up to just below her breasts, she had a white tank top under that and finally a white, front clasp bra. She also had tight jeans a white thong, and tennis shoes.

Janis, sitting behind Gayle, was best described as compact. She was short, standing only 5’2” and not likely to grow much more. She had a muscular, athletic body, not muscle-bound, but everything about her was firm and tight. She had muscular, thick legs, and a round ass. A flat tight stomach and 34D breasts. Lately she’d been thinking about a reduction, the breasts looked huge on her small frame and were starting to cause back problems. Her face was described as “baby face” with large brown “doe eyes,” with a slight olive tint to her skin. Her hair was incredibly long, almost to her ass, brown, and usually kept in a ridiculously long ponytail.

Janis had a red halter top which tied behind her neck along with a strapless black bra. Dark black Capri pants, hugging her ass and legs, a black thong and sandals.

The last girl was Briana. She sad in the back behind the empty front passenger’s seat. Briana was around 5’5” and compared the Janis and Gayle was “fuller.” She had round hips and what is usually called a “ghetto” ass. Her thighs were thick and she had large 34DD breasts which were meaty and regularly bounced whenever she went for a jog. Her skin was pale with dark brown hair, and royal blue eyes. Her hair was dark brown and fell is cascading waves down her back.

Briana had on a pink tank top, a blue bra, tight jeans, blue thong and sneakers.

The three girls climbed out of the stranded car and pulled out their cell phones. As they opened them each saw the same message “SEARCHING FOR SERVICE.” Briana laughed grimly.

“More bars in more places my ass.” Her cell phone clapped shut and she slid it into her purse.

“So what exactly are we going to do? We can’t call anyone and I can’t even remember how many miles it’s been since last past...well...anything.” Janis sounded a little nervous.

Gayle looked own the road. “I think I see some lights down there...maybe a house?”

Briana squinted. “Yeah, maybe. But I don’t know we’re kinda in the middle of nowhere here. Should we be knocking on random doors?”

Gayle sighed. “I know, but there are three of us and anything has to be better than sitting out here. It’s been hours since we last saw a car; no one else might come till morning.”

The three girls stood outside Gayle’s broken down car for a few minutes discussing. Eventually they decided that since there was three of them that it was probably the safest thing to go check the house. They began walking down the road. Reaching the driveway the three huddled together and headed slowly up the walk. Right as they arrived on the porch they heard the thunder. Janis laughed.

“Well at least we’ll be out of the rain.” Gayle reached up and knocked on the door loudly to get over the sound of the approaching storm.

Tyrone jumped as he heard the door knock. “Who the fucking hell could that be? It’s eleven fucking thirty!?” The knock was repeated, louder, clearly heard over the thunder.

“I don’t know man, but go get rid of whoever it is.” Jeff snorted throwing down his cards. “Fuck, I fold, I got no fucking luck tonight.”

Tyrone through his cards down too. “Yeah me neither, I’ll go check the door.” He pushed away from the table and strode down the hallway. The knocks kept repeating and the storm grew worse. “Shit, fucking pouring out there.” He chugged his beer and threw it in the trash as he reached the door. He opening it slowly, his old gang connections occasionally came back to bite him. But as the door swung open he pretty quickly realized this wasn’t a rival hit.

“Um hi there, can I help you?” Tyrone said as his eyes wandered over the three white hotties that stood on his porch. Wasn’t everyday three hot white teenagers showed up on his porch, he intended to enjoy it while it lasted.

“Um yeah hi.” That was the blonde in front. Tyrone eyes ran over her, trying not to be obvious. She looked like a athletic one. He noticed the blue eyes, innocent sweet face, his eyes slid down sliding over the firm round tits and flat stomach. He especially noticed the toned, athletic thighs in some tight ass jeans.

“Damn!” He thought. “Nice.”

“My car broke down,” she went on point to a black sedan a little ways down the road, “none of us are getting cell service. Any chance we could use your phone...mister...?”

“Tyrone. Bad place to break down gotta tell you. Pretty outta the way out here. Even if you can get a tow this late it’s gonna be awhile. But yeah, you can come on in and try. Don’t mind the other guys, just having a little get together.”

“Thank you so much!” That was the taller brunette. Tyrone’s eyes immediately slid to her.

“Hmmm she’s got some meat on her. Mark’s type, nice and busty.” He took in her sweet, innocent face. Then his eyes paused on two of the most massive tits he had every seen. The wobbled and jiggled as she moved, swinging from side to side. Her hips flared out. “Could get a real good grip on them.” Her ass was large, with quite a bit of jiggle over thick thighs.

“Yeah, we really appreciate it.” And the last one, the short little brunette. Tyrone’s gazed shifted to her. “Hmmm...that one could be fun.” He noted the big tits, which looked really huge on her small frame. “And they look real too, lucky girl. Rest of the bod looks real tight. Not an ounce of fat on this one. Short too, I know Mike likes em small. Loves the power rush.” He shook his head a little to get the lewd thoughts out.

“It’s no problem. No good for three girls to get stranded out here. But like I said you still might be stuck for awhile.” He held the door open and the three girls walked in. Tyrone’s eyes slid down to their asses nodding appreciatively as they swung past him. “Not bad, not bad at all.” He followed them in, closing the door.


Jeff looked up from the card table as three amazingly hot white girls walked into the kitchen followed closely by Tyrone. Briefly he thought about turning off the still running porno on the screen. The one that bad a busty blonde nurse on her knees sucking two black cocks. Then he thought. “Meh, fuck it.” He noted that the girls turned to the TV quickly, saw what was one then suddenly looked away, flushing. The short one yelped a little. Jeff nodded, “oh, three innocent ones huh. Interesting.”

The other four guys around the table were examining the girls making the same kind of evaluations that Tyrone and Jeff had made. To each of these men, white girls, especially white teenagers were little more than attractive meat, something to be leered at, enjoyed, and if possible used as receptacles for their cocks. And these three teens certainly gave plenty to enjoy.

Jeff found himself looking at the blonde more. She had a “homecoming queen” innocent about her. Probably wasn’t a virgin, but definitely hadn’t taken much cock, certainly never a black one. “Probably mace me if I ever tried anything. But then again...pretty naïve looking girls. They might not even realize what was happening until it was too late...” He started to think.

Tyrone spoke up from behind the girls. “Guys just deal me out for a few hands. These girls had car trouble and they’re just gonna use the phone. I’ll be back in a few. This way ladies.” He turned and started leading the girls over to the other side of the room where the phone was.

Jeff hadn’t missed Tyrone’s glance, even if the others had. He reached around the yanked out the cord the ran from the phone. He watched as the blonde, what had Tyrone said her name was...Gayle? Yeah, he watched as Gayle picked up the phone and shook her head, handing it Tyrone. Tyrone gave an Oscar worthy performance of concern and care. Derek laughed and leaned over.

“Awww, looks like the phone is broken. Wonder what the poor teen princesses are gonna do.”

Daquan snorted, “Love to give some comfort to the shorty, I bet I could make her forget all about her troubles.”

Mike watched them. “Yeah, they’d forget all about getting home after about five minutes with us huh?”

The small circle around the phone broke up and the girls, followed by Tyrone headed back. “Well guys, looks this bitch of the storm knocked out the phone lines. So Gayle, Janis and Briana are gonna have to hang out here for a little while.”

Briana hesitated. “I don’t know, I mean we could just go wait in the car.”

Jeff eyed her with fake concern. “Nah, its fuckin’ pouring out there sweety. You’d be soaked through by the time you made it down to the car. Wouldn’t want three pretty little things like you catching cold.”

Tyrone began introducing the guys. “Since you’re gonna be hanging with us for a little might as well know the guys. I’m Tyrone like I said, that’s Jeff, Mike, Mark, Derek, and Daquan. Why don’t you girls have a seat and grab a drink or something.”

Gayle stammered a little. “I mean are you sure? We really hate to interrupt your party.”

Jeff laughed. “Don’t worry blondie, party was just getting started you didn’t interrupt anything. Just relax alright?”

Gayle during and looked out the window at the driving rain and flashing lighting. She sighed. “Well, I guess it wouldn’t make much sense for us to talk back to the car. Alright we’ll stay, just until the storm lets up though. We want to let you guys get back to your party.”

All six men snickered a little. Mark stood up a little to go get himself another beer and eyed the girls. “Don’t worry baby, wasn’t much of a party, but I’m sure it’ll get better.”

The thunder crashed and Gayle, Janis and Briana’s world shattered


Hours Later...

Gayle screamed as she was thrown onto her back, crashing to the floor, her full weight slamming onto her hands. They were bound behind her back with her black scrunchie. At least she thought she screamed, she wasn’t even sure she could make noise anymore. But she must have screamed because she heard Derek snarl as climbed onto her.

“Yeah baby, that’s what I like to hear, tell me how much that hurts babe!” He gripped her ankles and viciously pulled her naked legs apart, splaying them wide. Gayle screwed her eyes shut, she knew what was coming. Suddenly she felt Derek’s huge hand grip her chin his fingers snaking up her cheeks. “Oh fuck no bitch! You open those eyes!” He smacked her viciously and then held her head “OPEN THEM WHORE! “

Gayle opened her eyes as Derek reached down with his other hand. He was pushing her firm cheerleader thighs apart. She shrieked as he buried his 9 inch cock deep into her pussy. It didn’t hurt as much as it had before but she still felt herself stretched. Derek bent low over her, her rock harp nipples scraping his chest as her tits bounced with each vicious thrust, he spit into her open mouth.

“Yeah that’s it prom queen take that nigger cock. Still fucking tight after all that black meat you’ve had tonight.” He leaned back and gripped her ankles, spreading her thighs into a wide “V” and lifting her ass off the floor. He viciously rammed his cock in and out of her pussy, burying his entire length, pulling it out to just the tip and than driving back home. Gayle found she could scream as she shrieked with each thrust in, she could feel his cock banging off her cervix. Derek stared at her tits, gorgeous white orbs capped by hard, dark red nipples. They bounced as he pounded into her. “God damn it been so long since I had a piece of pussy this prime.” He watched as the white girl below him stared up at him...she whimpered.

“Please, p...please...s..stop. I, I’m not...not l...like this...I’m...I’m a good...g...girl!” She shrieked and her eyes rolled back into her head as Derek buried his full length down into her. He groaned as he came again, his second time in Gayle. Not too much actually came out since he had buried several loads in Gayle and her friends so far already. He laughed at her.

“Still holding to that story huh cheerleader? Let me tell you what you are. You are a white teen slut. You’ve taken what? Six cocks tonight? More? I know I’ve done you at least twice. You think you’re a good girl!? You ain’t. You ain’t a cheerleader, you ain’t a prom queen. You ain’t nothing but a white, high school slut! In fact...” He reached down and wrapped his hand around the gold cross that hung from around Gayle’s neck, resting on her firm tits. With one yank he snapped the chain and threw the cross across the room. “You ain’t gonna be needing that and I think I could fence it for some good money. Now get up!”

He dragged Gayle to her feet and flipped her around slamming her back down onto the floor on her stomach. He climbed onto her and pressed his cock between her asscheeks. Bending to her ear he wrapped his hand in her golden blonde hair and yanked her head up. “Now I’m gonna work my cock between these bubble butt cheeks on yours until I’m ready to spear that ass again. And we’re gonna watch you’re two friends while we do. Alright Gayle?”

Derek smiled as he forced Gayle to watch what was happening to Janis and Briana. Despite everything that had occurred over the last several hours, everything she had seen Gayle was still in a state of shock and disbelief. Her frail, naïve teenage mind unable to grasp what she saw.

Briana was on her back on the kitchen table. Her head was hanging over one end, brown hair cascading down in the air in waves. Mark was pounding his cock into her open mouth, Gayle could see Briana’s throat pulsing as the shaft slid up and down. Mark was leaning over as he drove into her mouth, he mauled Briana’s bouncing, huge tits, squeezing the large, pale nipples, laughing. “Oh fuck yeah, look at these milk bags. Can’t believe she’d never had a cock between them before tonight!”

At the other end of Brian’s naked, writhing body was Mike. He held her legs up, her thick thighs quivering, soft ass rising off the table. Gayle could see his thick, dark shaft impaling Briana’s soft white ass. Could see her ass ripple each time he slammed into her driving her whole body forward and forcing her mouth further onto Mark’s cock. The table rocked and shook as Mike thrust his hips, using nothing but his stomach muscles to drive his 9 inch shaft into Briana’s formerly virgin ass. Like Gayle Briana’s inner thighs were covered in a mixture of vaginal fluid and semen. The mixture gave Mike the lubricant he needed to be able to take her like his. Resting on his knees on the kitchen table while he drove his cock into her.

Janis was on the ouch. Gayle could only see a small part of her ass and occasionally her swinging tits. She was facing the back of the couch riding Daquan as he drove his shaft up into her. Jeff, who seemed to have taken a particularly vicious liking to her, squatted over her driving his massive 11 inch cock into her ass. Tyrone, who had seemed so nice, was sitting on the top part of the couch, his legs hanging down on either side of Daquan’s head. Gayle could see his hips pistoning up driving his cock up into Janis small throat. He held her ponytail over her head gripping it tight. The straps of Janis’ halter hung down, the top bunched up under her big tits. Gayle hadn’t understood why she and Briana had been stripped of everything but their shoes while Janis had been left with the halter. Until she had watched Jeff take Janis ass while using the straps as reins.

Gayle could hear Janis’ gags as her entire body was swamped, nearly covered, by the writhing black flesh. The room was filled with muffled grunts and moans. Occasionally Janis or Briana would have a cock removed from their mouths and an ear splitting shriek or blood curdling “PLEASE NO MORE!” would sound.

Gayle herself shrieked as she felt Derek lift her ass up, her face crushed to the floor. She screamed as she felt his shaft break her ass open again. Her screams joined her friends, “NO NO!! NOT AGAIN! PLEASE!!” All she heard was Derek’s laughter.

“You just don’t get it do you prom queen. This ain’t nearly over. You three are gonna be having this kinda fun with us for a long time still. We still got a bunch of rooms in this house we gotta use. And then more than a few of us got some debts we gotta pay off. And you three are gonna help us. Jeff gonna start making calls once he’s given Janis over there another anal load.”

Gayle screamed endlessly as Derek’s cock turned her ass inside out again. She bucked and writhing on the floor before he yanked her head back by her hair, lifting her off the floor holding her painfully. Her body parallel to the floor with her hands tied behind her back. Her tits swung underneath her. She felt Derek lay back, pulling her onto his body, his cock still buried in her ass as she was forced to ride him in reverse. She began to pass out. Through her darkening vision she saw Jeff pull out Janis ass and walk over to her. He straddled her bouncing form. She felt more than law his thick, hard shaft slap down between her tits. Felt him mash them around his cock as she felt Derek yank the scrunchie off her hands, freeing them. Jeff grabbed her hands and made her squeeze her own tits around his shaft. She heard Jeff’s voice...

“This seems familiar huh blondie? Ain’t this how this all started, my cock between those perfect tits of yours?” She felt him shove the scrunchie into her mouth. As she began to pass out she thought...

“How did this happen? How could we have been so stupid? We should have realized...oh god...”

End Part 1:

Next time: “How did this happen?”

Constructive Criticism is always welcome. I do want to write part two. Let me know what you all think.

[baur_147]

hey man, I liked it a lot!

thx for sharing! looking forward to part 2!

[ns161]

Part II should be coming in a week or two (I've been real busy). Wanted to bump this to the top so people could get a re-read. Any commentary is still greatly appreciated.

What worked, what didn't work? Let me know.

[justmetoo]

Very nice story.

Too bad more people don't comment on these in here. I posted on a couple of days ago, and while it was slow getting going I wonder if there really is much interest for stories here.

[wolfshark77]

Good story. Looking forward to the next part!

[Jennevieve]

Good story, good writing, but you really should have told the story of how the rape began -- where's the thrill when you skip the most exciting part?

[Iguana]

Dude! this is awesome! It's a real hot story, and I liked the way you jumped ahead to the action, though I still want to see the in between part, as you promised to add. I really want to see how the gang makes money on these precious girls, and where they end up. Maybe on the streets as crack ho's?

Anyway, I'm looking forward to further additions to the story!